Post by nikki ^_^ on Nov 12, 2006 3:21:46 GMT -5
Ok, so....
I had this brain wave recently, and I want to turn it into a book.
I am very not sure on whether people would like it, so yeh, I need advice.
Sooooooo...In short:
This girl, named Nia, lives in Hawaii. She has kind of a phobia of water. Her mum thinks thats plain junk and signs her up for swimming lessons. (And she's from Australia Just had to tell you that) Slowly, she gets less afraid until she finds out that to move up a level, she had to swim in the ocean (She was learning in a pool) She immediately got freaked out, and refued to go in the pool.
Then, this girl, (who, surprisingly, is also from Australia) whose name is Angie, comes to Hawaii. They are both outcasts, and they become friends. Angie is a really good swimmer, and she starts to teach Nia all her tips and stuff on how she swims. Again, sloooowly, Nia loses her fear of water. She starts to swim in the ocean and stuff and then, one day, while swimming around, she finds this ENOURMOUS rock/ crystal thing. It was made up of tiny crystal things. She was like looking around it when there was a flash of light, and it started to rain. She knew it was a storm, but it was really, really, really sudden.
Kay, can I do the rest later? My fingers hurt...
Tell me if you like it!
Please???
I had this brain wave recently, and I want to turn it into a book.
I am very not sure on whether people would like it, so yeh, I need advice.
Sooooooo...In short:
This girl, named Nia, lives in Hawaii. She has kind of a phobia of water. Her mum thinks thats plain junk and signs her up for swimming lessons. (And she's from Australia Just had to tell you that) Slowly, she gets less afraid until she finds out that to move up a level, she had to swim in the ocean (She was learning in a pool) She immediately got freaked out, and refued to go in the pool.
Then, this girl, (who, surprisingly, is also from Australia) whose name is Angie, comes to Hawaii. They are both outcasts, and they become friends. Angie is a really good swimmer, and she starts to teach Nia all her tips and stuff on how she swims. Again, sloooowly, Nia loses her fear of water. She starts to swim in the ocean and stuff and then, one day, while swimming around, she finds this ENOURMOUS rock/ crystal thing. It was made up of tiny crystal things. She was like looking around it when there was a flash of light, and it started to rain. She knew it was a storm, but it was really, really, really sudden.
Kay, can I do the rest later? My fingers hurt...
Tell me if you like it!
Please???
