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Post by InsaneShannon on Jun 4, 2006 12:42:09 GMT -5
I know, I'm not one to write a horror story, but I got this idea last night.
Please review! Katie-Alan commands you to! xDDDD
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Post by InsaneShannon on Jun 16, 2006 15:32:11 GMT -5
Ok. I'll stop with the "_______ commands you to!" stuff. But someone please review.
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Post by Mistress Emma on Jun 16, 2006 20:04:40 GMT -5
Mmm... It was pretty good. I think you could've come up with a more inventive way of killing them though. And it all seems a bit rushed, but all in all, pretty good.
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Post by InsaneShannon on Jun 18, 2006 12:57:05 GMT -5
Thanks.  I know, it's a bit rushed. A lot of my stories are very, very rushy. |
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